The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
Ha...you got me! Very clever and cute.
06/04/07
I loved this!!! The title was perfect for the ending as you revealed it. This was smart, great writing.
06/05/07
Yeah, it's super, super cute!! And you lead us along! Good writing!
06/06/07
Clever! I knew it was some unexpected adventure - I was actually wondering if it was a bunch of dads babysitting or something LOL. Great description especially, and character development.