The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
Interesting story and good illustration of how God sometimes has to go to extreme lengths to get our attention...and bring us back into the fold.
06/02/07
Great title "Chasing Grace". And I loved the line "finding much sweeter rest than she had expected". Perfect fit with the title. A unique story. I really liked it. Loved the description of the chase with the surprise ending. Aren't we often surprised by our heavenly Father, too?
06/02/07
Excellent allegory--makes a great story!
06/04/07
Nice.

Very clever.
06/04/07
Perfect title and wonderful work here. Lovely message I won't soon forget given the imagery you beautifully wrote.
06/08/07
Kristi, I judged this week, and I really liked your entry. I had to mark you down a little on your beginning, as it has to really hook in the reader in a dramatic way, but you did well in all of the other categories.