The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Loved the story (and I'm not just saying that because the MC and I share a name, which I've never seen in a story before.).
Chilling ending. Great job.
06/03/07
Great intrigue and story, the POV issues bothered me however.
06/12/07
Congratulations on your highly commended. Great job with the adventure genre.