The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
Wonderful word pictures of a devastating moment in history. I like the way you describe his brief uncertainty over the means to the end he felt was justified. Good writing!
06/04/07
Great descriptive writing here. I felt like I was there. Well done!
06/08/07
Joe, I judged for this week of entries and loved yours. It was so descriptive and heartfelt, and might do well in some literary publications. If you want to get more comments or see if you made it into the top 40, go visit the message boards. This was actually 32nd out of almost 200 :) http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/