The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
Great story. Good flow.
Wonderful read. Good story on recognizing our need for God.
06/01/07
Great description of the downward slide to a reality check. Good work.
A wonderful adventure with great descriptions and a just-right message for an ending.
06/03/07
Love the descriptions as well as the message here. And the last line was perfect. :)
09/17/08
Great writing! I could see and feel everything.