The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Pretty poem.
06/04/07
Quite lyrical, and a good use of alliteration.

Watch apostrophe use (Eye's wide...)

I enjoyed the imagery of this romantic poem.
06/06/07
I love the lovely aLliteration. Beautiful.
06/06/07
I like it! You made me smile and I'm glad the hero "got the girl" in the end!
06/06/07
Quite fun! A good ol' classic western read...well sort of. ^_^ The lyrical read to it was much better. Good job. I don't see why it doesn't have more comments, it was fun to read with a nice happy ending.
02/21/08
Love this. Thank you for sharing your gift. Great reading as I'm awake so early in the morning, unable to sleep.
Laury