The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good story. I really enjoyed it. Would make a great beginning to a book.
Absolutely adorable! I'd be right there with him eating berries... yum!! (some girls do like dirt and mud lol)
This is very cute. You had me with you all the way -- wanting to know what he was trying to allude. Your descriptions were very good. I felt like I was experiencing the forest all around me. Nice job.
Your vivid descriptions are addicting.
Loved your story!
Great description, and you ended this PERFECTLY. A fun read.
How cute. I can just see the little guy running in and fuming about having to wear a clean shirt. Good job. ^_^
As a judge for this, I felt that you really caught the essence of the character perfectly. I was able to live through him for the few moments of his freedom. You've got talent!