The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good story. I really enjoyed it. Would make a great beginning to a book.
06/02/07
Absolutely adorable! I'd be right there with him eating berries... yum!! (some girls do like dirt and mud lol)
06/06/07
This is very cute. You had me with you all the way -- wanting to know what he was trying to allude. Your descriptions were very good. I felt like I was experiencing the forest all around me. Nice job.
Your vivid descriptions are addicting.
Loved your story!
06/06/07
Great description, and you ended this PERFECTLY. A fun read.
06/06/07
How cute. I can just see the little guy running in and fuming about having to wear a clean shirt. Good job. ^_^
06/08/07
As a judge for this, I felt that you really caught the essence of the character perfectly. I was able to live through him for the few moments of his freedom. You've got talent!