The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Very nice detail - you write well - always love to read abit of history.
06/02/07
Enjoyed this adventure from the pages of history!
Definitely an adventure with action. I liked how you fleshed out the character of Colter in the very beginning. Vivid descriptions. Excellent writing.
06/04/07
A graphic part of our country's history. You wrote and told the story well.
06/05/07
Excellent detail and action. You did a great job of putting me right in the middle of the scene.
06/07/07
Now, this is what I call adventure! The fact that it is confirmed by historical accounts makes it all the more effective.Good Job.
06/07/07
I enjoyed reading this story immensely. My favorite kind; history and fiction. Great!