The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I love a good senior citizen's story. I actually wrote an alternate story that I didn't enter about a senior who was going to a bingo game and got stopped by a policeman. Great minds, and all that, huh? Good action in this piece. It's a keeper.
05/31/07
Hilarious! Well done.
One exciting ride! Whew! Hope this is not what I'm looking forward to!
06/04/07
Loads of fun! And your last line is precious and perfect. Fun stuff, my friend!
06/04/07
It just goes to show that no matter your age you can find trouble. :) I felt like I was riding along with them. Your adventure is entertaining.
06/05/07
ROFL! What a joyride indeed. That Henry must have been a world-class mischeif maker in his younger years. ^_^ A delightful read, especially seeing from an older POV. I loved Dorothy's ongoing thoughts though. Very nice.
06/06/07
What a cute story. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. Good writing.