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This was fun...even if I don't read spanish. Interesting twist at the end.
I enjoyed the adventure very much...kept wondering what was going to happen next and what a coffee house was.
05/31/07
Great story, enjoyed the ending! Well done!
06/01/07
Nice writing -- good details - read like a movie.
06/03/07
You did a very good job of translating the Spanish without translating it, if you know what I mean. You definitely kept my interest all the way through - I was very eager to know where the next stop in the adventure would lead.
06/03/07
Great story! loved it
06/04/07
Wow! Definitely one of my favorites so far...I kept wondering what the twist was going to be--knew there'd be one--but I couldn't guess it. Super!
A very enjoyable read. Definately want more - curious minds ya know!
Reads like one of my all time adventure authors, Clive Cussler - I could just keep right on reading. Great job.
06/04/07
What happens next? Pulled me into the adventure from start to finish.
06/05/07
This is just plain good old fashioned adventure reading. Now, for chapter two ^_^ My appetite is all whetted and waiting.
This is good stuff. I could smell that coffee. Like others have said, I'd like to know what's next. Where's chapter two?
Very nice. I want to read more about Randy. I enjoyed the character and the story.
06/06/07
A coffee house. How fun! I know a certain someone who would love an adventure like this. I liked the sailing terms and especially the dialouge. Very realistic. ^_^
I'm a little confused here. If this is a friendly village, why the guns? Did I miss something. However, it was an enjoyable read and the happy ending was good.