The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
this was great ... lol! I'm a little dense so it took me a few stanzas to get it figured out ... but then, even knowing what was comming, I enjoyed every developing line! The meter slipped once or twice, me thinks, but the piece as a whole was great!
05/26/07
Not familiar with poem forms. Is this a ballad? Good job.
05/26/07
Dummy me! I forgot to remember the title before I left a comment. Duh!
05/26/07
This is very nice. Easy to read and flows well. You did a great job.
05/28/07
Classic!!!
05/29/07
Humorous and wonderful to read. A very pleasing ballad!
05/29/07
:)... Well written poem, great job!
05/29/07
Lots of wonderful words used to tell a great ballad! Very well constructed.
05/29/07
I enjoyed the language here,and the humor. Lovely.
05/29/07
Fiction, poetry, you don't miss a beat. Great job. God bless.
05/30/07
Perfect in every way!
05/30/07
A great narrative poem! A most delightful read--reminded me in style of the "The Cremation of Sam McGee."
05/30/07
What a voice this piece has. Very entertaining. Thanks for sharing this.
05/30/07
Very nicely written. :)
05/31/07
Congratulations. This is a wonderful piece to read. Great job.