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05/24/07
How our souls long for the stability of a coming Christ! Good job.
05/24/07
Adored the line
Restore us to our focus.... Loved how you brought it back around. Great job!
05/24/07
Restore to us our focus
Almighty Anchor
Powerful Potentate
Great God

The power and feeling in this simple prayer is worth everything. Thanks for capturing this sentiment so well.
05/25/07
This is great. I love this. Good job.
05/29/07
Excellent metaphor; I really appreciated this one.
One question: you used the phrase "meaningful ceremonies" - did you mean "meaningless ceremonies"? This confused me.
Keep up the good work!