The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Love the line..."you're a living Valentine." Any lady would be happy to receive a poem like this.
05/24/07
This was written by a great writer and romantic. I absolutely loved it!
05/24/07
Someone is a very fortunate lady. :)
05/25/07
A beautiful little poem and So well stated. The rhythm is off a bit in the last verse...but still I thought it lovely.
05/25/07
Chariming...love it!!!
05/25/07
Great tribute to a love. Makes me think of my husband. Fantastic.
05/26/07
A delightful way to serenade your love!
05/26/07
Wonderful tribute to the one you love.
05/30/07
Absolutely beautiful! this is one of my favorites, out of all that I've read this week. That first stanza is excellent!
05/30/07
One thought for critique: the rhymes in that last line sound a bit forced - the line "That's all that I can say" sounds a bit like it was thrown in just because it rhymes. I don't think you really need the last stanza - the stanzas before it express all you need to say!
Great poem, I really enjoyed it.