The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
This is a great Bible lesson and a fun read. I enjoyed the humor as well. I think you made this genre work for you!
05/24/07
Great take on David's story!
Good account of a Biblical David.
05/25/07
Brilliant! Humorous! True! A rhythmic masterpiece - well done!
05/26/07
Fantastic take on David's life. You did a great job.
05/28/07
Normally, I wouldn't comment on a whole poem of rhymed couplets,but this has merit as a story poem.
05/29/07
This would make a cute Sunday School poem.
This poem is a good one for kids; both the topic, the rhyming scheme, and the humor makes for a fun read.
05/30/07
Allison, this is such a fun and clever look at David!
05/31/07
I so enjoyed this! I could see this as a children's book.