The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Great progression from broken to restored because of His grace. I thought this was great writing and I enjoyed it very much!
05/25/07
I loved the message in this poem. It brought me to my knees with past regrets. Great job!
An excellent poem of the hope of salvation.
This is just beautiful! My only suggestion would be to take out the word "peaceful" in the last stanza. It breaks the rhythm, but it certainly doesn't distract from the depth of meaning you have conveyed.
05/28/07
Good job. Awesome thoughts.
I especially like the last stanza here.
This is a well-written poem. Great job!
05/30/07
This is beautiful. The last stanza is so comforting. Good job.