The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I think He's smiling and saying well done. You captured the fear those of us not strong in this genre had when poetry was announced!
I love this poem. Perhaps you have a far greater gift than you thought--to rhyme, to reason, and to inspire laughter!
Very humorous. Good job.
05/26/07
It's good to give God a chuckle once in a while. You did great, and I'm sure He laughed.
You could have fooled me...your poem is terrific, and funny, too! I especially like the final stanza. Maybe you've found a new genre!
05/28/07
I liked it, light and humorous. Good job.
:-)... Maybe the vessel is cracked, but it still holds plenty of smiles for the sharing!