The Official Writing Challenge
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Your line....... "the manger is a perfect picture of the human heart...." is so profound! COME TO MY HEART, LORD JESUS! THERE'S ROOM IN MY HEART FOR YOU! Very moving piece!
Moving piece. Beautifully written.
05/02/05
I've read this one four times already. Great work. There's a true, honest emotion to it. It feels very real. Plus it's sprinkled with many many great lines. My favorite is:
>>Only in the darkest of places can you fully appreciate a sudden burst of light.<<
Great work! Thank you for submitting it!
05/03/05
An uplifting read. Great last line.
05/03/05
Beautifully written straight from the heart. Thank-you.
05/07/05
from being taken, at Christmas, by men in white to his final Christmas when he leaves with angels in white. Beautiful, in spite of [or because of] the difficult early days. Good job !