The Official Writing Challenge
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I can SO relate to this one - I think we all can! It flows nicely, and the message is profound.
This is great! You read my heart, maybe even my journal, and made this shine. Very well written.
Very good!
Great lesson here. Good job.
The last stanza, so powerful, sums it all up beautifully.
What a wonderful truth expressed here. Good job.
I really liked this one - that ending is powerful!
Interesting, almost lyrical.
I have felt this way so many times. This was lovely, and so true.
Don't we all feel this way sometimes? Well said.
I ditto the comments above - you've touched an universal chord that runs through all of us. I like the way you ended, showing that regardless of the situations we find ourselves in, He is always in control.
Awesome! Absolutely, AWESOME!

I can sooo relate!
Boy could I relate to this poem. I've been there many times. You did a great job getting your message across in this poem.
Very nice! I think you did a pretty good job here! ^_^ The title fits it well and the ryhthm of it is just right. Great job!