The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I can SO relate to this one - I think we all can! It flows nicely, and the message is profound.
05/24/07
This is great! You read my heart, maybe even my journal, and made this shine. Very well written.
05/25/07
Very good!
05/25/07
Great lesson here. Good job.
The last stanza, so powerful, sums it all up beautifully.
What a wonderful truth expressed here. Good job.
I really liked this one - that ending is powerful!
05/30/07
Interesting, almost lyrical.
I have felt this way so many times. This was lovely, and so true.
Don't we all feel this way sometimes? Well said.
I ditto the comments above - you've touched an universal chord that runs through all of us. I like the way you ended, showing that regardless of the situations we find ourselves in, He is always in control.
05/30/07
Awesome! Absolutely, AWESOME!

I can sooo relate!
Boy could I relate to this poem. I've been there many times. You did a great job getting your message across in this poem.
05/30/07
Very nice! I think you did a pretty good job here! ^_^ The title fits it well and the ryhthm of it is just right. Great job!