The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely, and a good reminder that we should not forget what Christ did for us. Thank you for this well done piece.
Loved the message of this poem. May we never forget what Jesus has done for us.......
05/24/07
this really touched me ... very moving, great message. well crafted and solid. Thanks for posting this!
This needs to be put to music. I could almost hear it as I read. Just beautiful!
Wonderful poem of worship.
05/28/07
Very, very nice. Wonderful.
This encourages me to draw closer to Jesus and praise Him for all He's done. Well done!
Great reminder!
One thought for critique: I think this poem could be even more inspiring if you added more imagery.
Keep up the good work!
05/30/07
This has potential to be turned into a hymn. This rocked for me. Great, great entry. Thanks for the read.