The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
What a great way to share all He's done for us and why we should choose Him. Strong writing, awesome message.
What a powerful message and told so that anyone can understand. Excellent writing!
Very good pov here. However some stanzas rhyme and some don't. Seems a mixture of prose and verse, but it is very well written and could easily be made all prose.
05/26/07
Great view of Jesus's sacrifice. Wonderful.
05/26/07
A powerful, timeless message. I had a little trouble with the rhythm, but I liked it anyway. Good work!
05/29/07
Wonderful message in this poem! The "almost persuaded" ones are so sad and need our continued prayers that one day they will be fully persuaded instead! Thank you for sharing this! :)
Good reminder. I thought the title and first stanza didn't flow very well with the rest of the poem, though - first you described the man who was "almost persuaded", then switched to describing what Christ did for us. Just my thoughts, though - please feel free to take them or leave them!