The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I felt like I was on a tour of this home and the history involved. So well described and emotional. Very well done!
05/25/07
You pictured the old house well. Glad to see you coming to its rescue.
05/26/07
Loved the imagery here, the history of the house, and its renewal!
05/27/07
Wonderful description. Very easy read.
05/29/07
I liked the progression through this poem. That ending made a neat contrast to the rest of the poem.