The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
I felt like I was on a tour of this home and the history involved. So well described and emotional. Very well done!
You pictured the old house well. Glad to see you coming to its rescue.
Loved the imagery here, the history of the house, and its renewal!
05/27/07
Wonderful description. Very easy read.
I liked the progression through this poem. That ending made a neat contrast to the rest of the poem.