The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Beautiful, this flowed perfectly to me from title to end. Wonderful job!
I like the imagery of the runner and the dust that teaches this timeless truth so effortlessly. Well done.
The last line sums up the poem nicely "A rhythm of love for my King."
05/26/07
Wonderful. Very easy read.
Beautiful poetry here. Very well written. Wonderful pov.
I like that last stanza, and how it is connected with the first.
I suggest that you add punctuation; it makes a poem easier to read.
Keep up the good work!