The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
This reads like Shakespeare! How haunting, and what a romantic read. Amazing.
Haunting! I like the voice and the lilting rhythm of this poem. Very nice.
05/26/07
I agree with the Shakespeare comment. Good work. I could never come up with something like this.
05/28/07
Wonderful job with the structure of this fable-poem!
05/28/07
Wonderful job with the structure of this fable-poem!
The word play here is very strong. But somehow I don't quite understand. Maybe this is a rendition of a story I'm not familiar with. But the writing is very strong here, and others may already know the tale. Good job.
05/29/07
Ilike it--very creative story that you came up with. I love reading your stories; you excel at telling fantasy and fables. I only wish I could do as well!
This reads like a ballad of old, and it's beautiful...
This sounds like an old English narrative--very visual and sad, excellently done.
05/29/07
Beautiful - and I love the repetition. Very effective, and lovely!
05/29/07
I love a romantic poem. Great job. God bless.
05/30/07
Fantastic in every way!
Wow. A beautiful legend, for sure. I felt the rhythm faltered a time or two, but it didn't detract from the overall feel and romantic tale told here. Very well done.
05/30/07
A fable? The beginning of an epic? Beautifully written in an eloquent style.
Such a sweet fable woven into poetry. I was very impressed with how you wrote this.
05/30/07
What a lovely, romantic mood this poem evokes! Great writing and wonderful story! :)