The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the message in your poem.
05/24/07
great images and a good lesson. Well done!
05/25/07
I love this. It has a nice flow to it and I'm partial to rhyming poetry. This poem has a great message with wonderful imagery, written in a clear manner on a subject that I could relate to. Great job.
05/26/07
Wonderful poem. Very enjoyable.
05/27/07
This was beautiful and I loved the message.
I like the images you painted in this poem.
One thought for critique: I think the rhythm trips in a few places, you might want to be careful of this.
Great poem, keep up the good work!
Wonderfully written, encouraging poem. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful. Very encouraging and reminds us who is in control and loves us so. God bles your writing. Janice