The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Soooo intertaining and refreshing! Wow - this is good!
05/24/07
What a fun, original piece! I'm glad they got out of the water eventually - I had a feeling they were going to stay there together! From the title I'm thinking I must have missed the first installment, but it stood well alone.
What a clever idea! Wow! I love this one! Great job!I just have two questions. Did they ever strike oil or vacation in Beverly Hills?LOL.Keep up the great work. This made my day. Now, I have to soak in the creek, so if you'll excuse me, I am grabbin da soap and hikin' up my oer'alls...g'by.:0)GRIN!!Janice
This is really cute. You must not be new to poetry. Good job.
What a great sense of humor! I agree.... this isn't your first rodeo with poetry!
05/24/07
Very enjoyable and entertaining. God bless.
05/24/07
too funny ... and I think I know those people! ;-) Excellent work and very very strong grasp of the English language.
05/25/07
This is cute. I like the "yearly bath." Too funny.
Break out the fiddle, washtub and start tapping your toes - I think I hear a real hillbilly tune hidden in this entertaining piece!
05/28/07
This is great! Amazing job with all the rhyme, too. Original and creative! It should stand out in a crowd, for sure! Great job!
05/28/07
Clever and cute..and, ummm, ewwwww.
05/29/07
As soon as I saw the title, I couldn't wait to read this and I was not disappointed! Unique and clever.
05/29/07
Gosh, Dang it! Ah got me a knee-slappin',back-thumpin', sahd-splittin', floor-rollin' good laff outa this! Good rhymin' too.
What a great voice this piece has. It's entertaining and fun, too. Big thumbs up.
Oh my! this was truly entertaining and clever, clever, clever! Kudos!
This one is hilarious... :D
Thanks for a delightful poem! I believe it truly could be sung accompanied by a fiddle!
05/29/07
Just delightful and fun. I had a giggle in my throat through the whole thing. Great stuff, Cassie!
05/30/07
WOW! WOW! WOW! Love it!
05/30/07
Wonderful! A nice little tale, and it flowed very well. Overall a very enjoyable read.
05/31/07
Woohoo Cassie Girl! One of my favies! I'm so glad it got first! Enjoy the clouds today. Congratulations! Love,
Pat
05/31/07
Congratulations. This is really fun to read. Great imagination, and imagery.