The Official Writing Challenge
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Great ending. We have nothing to fear with God on our side.
I think that adding more imagery could make this poem even more powerful. Something for you to consider, anyway.
Keep up the good work!
05/25/07
I like the message here, but the structure doesn't quite do it for me. Great work.
05/26/07
Neat message, great ending!
05/28/07
Your message is excellent. Painting pictures with your words would help this poem. Free verse is difficult to write so that it still feels like a poem.

Nevertheless, the message of continued prayer through good times and bad is very good. Thanks for sharing.
very encouraging reading on the power of prayer.
I LOVE the message here. If you work this a bit and include a scripture passage it would be a great devotional piece.