The Official Writing Challenge
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Great ending. We have nothing to fear with God on our side.
I think that adding more imagery could make this poem even more powerful. Something for you to consider, anyway.
Keep up the good work!
I like the message here, but the structure doesn't quite do it for me. Great work.
Neat message, great ending!
Your message is excellent. Painting pictures with your words would help this poem. Free verse is difficult to write so that it still feels like a poem.

Nevertheless, the message of continued prayer through good times and bad is very good. Thanks for sharing.
very encouraging reading on the power of prayer.
I LOVE the message here. If you work this a bit and include a scripture passage it would be a great devotional piece.