The Official Writing Challenge
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I love that last line! Being a nature lover, I know the experience.
One thought for critique: watch your rhymes, some of them sound a little forced, such as he/me and call/all.
Keep up the good work!
05/25/07
I like this. It was an easy, gentle read. Good work.
05/26/07
This reminds me of Frost's work, I feel like I just took a really nice walk and took in all the sights. You didn't miss a thing, well done!
What a wonderful walk through nature. Very good.