The Official Writing Challenge
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That last stanza is incredible. Excellent job!
05/26/07
This is splendid. Water speaks to me and you used this theme masterfully. Powerful writing, may this not be your last poem submitted!
05/26/07
Great comparison of our Christian walk with the ocean. Good job.
05/28/07
What a beautiful poem, the message is powerful. Well written.
05/30/07
I love you graceful imagery with the use of water. Beautiful!
05/30/07
I love the imagery here. This truly painted a wonderful portrait in my head. Lovely!
05/30/07
Great imagery. I especially love the image of the title--it fits the rest of the poem, too. Good job!