The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/07
Yo Yo, Dog! Really unique and a great message. I could the beat-boxing!
05/24/07
This is very good. It would help to somehow separate who is speaking each time. Maybe italics for one speaker? But the message is very good and well taken.
05/24/07
Yo, Bro! Let the drums roll.
It's a hit for sho'!
05/24/07
I love it! Faithwriters Rap! good work! This is a keeper!
05/24/07
Great rap, great message. You and another rapper here should sell your pieces to a Christian rapper. Awesome!
05/24/07
I can't stand rap...LOVED THIS! Good work! Great message!
05/25/07
I love this. Livin' in Mimphus, I can relate.

Great job.
05/25/07
Thanks for a rap that I could listen to!
05/30/07
Amusing but a wonderful message contained in an unusual way. Thanks for sharing it
05/30/07
What a fun voice - and that last line is an absolute keeper. I'm sure you enjoyed writing this one.
05/30/07
I liked the boldness of going with a rap theme, the commentary and message in the article, as well as Scriptural references without all the details. Nice work. My suggestion with it being a 'rap' would be to include a chorus and to string the lines together in a different scheme. The piece went start to finish, but I felt the art of the piece itself was only just beginning.
05/30/07
Oh, wow! That's really making things understandable.
05/30/07
Flat out kewl. A fun way to say a tribute to the Father. Thanks.
05/30/07
Fantastic in every way!
05/30/07
Personally, I don't like/understand rap...but this piece just might help change my mind.
Great message in lyrical form and oh so creative.
Fun and wonderful at the same time.
Pat Guy  
05/30/07
Oh Al ... I should have known this was yours the first time around.

Enjoyed it even more the second ... I think it's a classic!
05/31/07
So obviously I was grabbed by the title, but somehow thought that it wouldn't be actual rappin' So all I can say is..."Yo piece was whack, straight up off da heezie fo shizzle"...which loosely translated means...That was a really exceptional poem comprised of poignant expressions and meaningful messages. :)