The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/07
This is very intense. I could feel the tension from the first word to the last. Love the last line, too.
05/21/07
Hmm. Very interesting. This has a lot of potential and I especially like the POV in which it is written. Very nice. I wasn't quite sure at the ending, but that could be just me. Thanks for sharing! ^_^
wonderful story, very intriging and intense. well done.