The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/07
Definitely creative - gave me goosebumps. A bit hard to follow, but I was fascinated.
05/21/07
I wish this would go on and on. The guy would leave and run into them again and the first memory would haunt him always. LOL, here I go running away with your story. This is amazing. You kept me reading all the way through and I really enjoyed the trip. The descriptions were wonderful and I loved the character of the little girl. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!