The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
What a great concept, the Above the Waters! The only thing that tripped me up just a little was in the first paragraph with "had started", but only a little. This was a great read!
Your descritions are wonderful. You write them in such a natural way. Example, "his feet swinging underneath the table." ( or something like that, I can't see the story now!)I wish it could be a lot,lot longer because the Above-the-Waters concept is really interesting and almost sounds like it could be something in a scary novel. I'd love to read more!
05/23/07
How imaginative and well-written! I really enjoyed this interesting story from start to finish! :)
05/23/07
A well written warm story. Good descriptions.
A great story. You put it all together beautifully.
05/23/07
Neat take on the topic. I love this lesson that works either below OR above the waters - and in any time. Good job weaving it in.
05/23/07
What a wonderful story! The message of it is timeless. Very well done! :-)
05/23/07
I really like this. You keep getting better. God bless.