The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
this was amazingly creative. Loved it, and very fitting in an era that computers are rapidly becoming intergrated into our world. I did spot a few typos, "h is" instead of "his" is on that I recall right now.
05/17/07
Very well done. I loved the message, the dialogue between the captain and the intern. I too saw a couple typos but still, a wonderful read!
05/21/07
A very creative take on sci-fi -- well done. Interesting to think that computers may be the only ones left to share the Gospel.
05/21/07
Wow! What a concept! Loved the layers of messages that speak through this. Well done and good job!
05/21/07
I loved that the computer was teaching them about God. What a neat twist to things! Yes, there were typos, but those clean up--you got the message in and that was great. Good job. :-)
05/22/07
Fun and creative idea...resolved a bit too neatly perhaps. Very entertaining to read.
LOL... this one is creative... Good job!