The Official Writing Challenge
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What a triple threat this is--Sci Fi, Romance and poetry. The descriptions were so powerful, this was enchanting, haunting, alluring, I really really enjoyed reading this, and will come back to it again!
Extremely unique and one of a kind. The format, the talent, this is just awesome! My favorite lines were: Remembering
Our oneness
In a world we cannot see.
Something very moving about that. I have no suggestions for improvement, just congratulations for writing your heart out! ^_^
Wow. I clicked on the link and said, "Oh. A poem." I didn't mean to read it, but the format caught my eye and then I thought, "Well, maybe I'll just read the first verse..." You sucked me in from there. Keep up the great job!
LOVE the format, and the alliteration. I think you are a force to deal with - in sci-fi AND poetry! So visual and tactile. Excellent.
What a marvelous entry! I hope it does very well; it was written by a master poet and imagineer.
Excellent poem combining sci-fi with poetical imagery. Great job!
Well done. The imagery and structure are very powerful elements of this piece. An enjoyable and haunting piece.
Picture perfect poetry!
I love the powerful imagery and alliteration you used in this beautiful poem.