The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Wow. Can you imagine and yet you depicted this scenario so clearly. Very well done.
05/18/07
The title isn't as powerful as I thought it hinted to the story. The idea was very original and your descriptions were top notch. You presented this as very realistic in a you-are-there atmosphere. Good job.
05/18/07
I just loved how you inserted that verse from Psalms. You story would have been great without it. With it, it's perfect. Keep up the awesome work!
05/18/07
Very nice.