The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
What a touching story. I have a friend with two boys who show signs of autism and the system is forever trying to label them because they are "different." This was enlightening.
05/18/07
Kudos to you for such brilliant creativity! This was truly touching and somewhat haunting to think all of that from a dream. Wow. My favorite line was Or even that he might do something truly commendable, such as folding squares of cardboard into boxes of rectangular symmetry….” ROFL! That is too funny. Very well written, I enjoyed the read! ^_^
05/18/07
Very nice & interesting. (May have worked better, just for sci-fi, if it wasn't just a dream?) Excellant points at the end!
05/19/07
I loved this story! Great imagination and creativity. A very touching story and wonderfully written. The ending was perfect. Very nice work!