The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
I have chills on this one. The future sure looks scary based on our choices displayed so well here.
05/18/07
Wow. If this is the future...wow. You captured the essence of something I 'hope' never happens. Amazing. I liked the dialouge between the too, but the parallels were so well done. Amazing. This gave me goosebumps.
05/18/07
Hahaha! I loved how you ended it! IT was thought-provoking, yet humorous.
05/19/07
I love how tongue in cheek this is - yet with a haunting message. Made me laugh (yes, again! hehe).
This left me smiling, and almost horrified at the same time.
You have a good imagination. Kudos.
05/23/07
What a great piece of writing! You brilliantly captured a horrific possible future that I hope never happens. Well done, Leigh!!!