The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Very imaginative and interesting - This also has a good message. Let's hope this isn't what the future holds for humankind!!
05/18/07
Very interesting and also disturbing story! It is plausible such a scenario could happen someday (if God tarried long enough), where the ruling powers would try to eradicate all memory of God. Thank you for a thought-provoking piece!
05/18/07
Wow. This is echanting and haunting at the same time. I do not think I could imagine something like this. Wow. Your descriptions were amazing and ditto that for your characters. I can't think of anything to improve. Good writing! ^_^
05/18/07
What an awesome imagination at work here. This was haunting but so well done.
05/18/07
You have a very interesting imagination. Very nicely written and a great message.