The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
I really liked this family sci-fi story!
05/18/07
What a great family story here. This was very sweet!
05/18/07
What a great message. I can't wait to let my daughter read it. She needs this message now. Well written and a really great SciFi twist. Good Job!
05/22/07
Neat story! “Deus planted you here for a time and for a reason. Don’t waste it away wishing you were somewhere else." What a good reminder for all of us! Good job!
This story was incredibly well-conceived. I am in awe of how much creativity there is - you got all the details just right, and it all sounded natural. Plus, I like the lighter storyline and how we're just peeking in on a regular teenaged life, but like a thousand years from now. :-) Excellent job!
05/23/07
Charming, this was a refreshing read! Great writing!
I loved your story, and it was interesting to see how teen-age eyes roll---on whatever planet!
05/23/07
Excellent integration of the technology in a lesson for EVERY age. Helps us remember we're all the same, eh? Wonderful.
05/23/07
Very descriptive and entertaining. Well done. God bless.
05/24/07
Being a born again horticulturalist, (and a 56 year old teenager) I can readily relate to this story. A very creative way of presenting a scriptural principle. Well done.