The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
wow, the implications of the ashes and the towers...*shivers*
05/18/07
Oh I want to read more! This definitely has my interest.
05/19/07
Good reading! "Forever" indeed! Great writing!
05/22/07
Wow. This is neat. I admire her after all those years, you hint and many different underlying emotions, the dialouge between her and her sister is very good. I wish there was more to this. Great writing!
The ending to this one is great. Good, well-written story; keep up the good work!
06/02/07
Whoa... that was some piece! You could turn that into either a novella or a novel.