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05/02/05
Beautifully written!.....and true :)
What a heart-warming, "put you in the Christmas spirit" story..... It puts in perspective what Christmas is really all about. Loved it!
05/02/05
Very creative! I liked it a lot.
05/03/05
You capture the frenetic busness of Christmas so well, my heart was pumping. Then took us the a place of peace.
05/03/05
I loved the second half of this in its peaceful simplicity.
Talk about putting you in the mood for Christmas (in May, no less). I wrote a piece that kind of attempted to make the same point, but you said it oh, so much better with this story.
05/05/05
Very nice ... detailing how simple Christmas really is. Thank you for a nice piece!
05/06/05
you took us on a stroll through a frantic shallow world yo a niche of peace. Thanks for letting us rest beside the characters. Well done piece [peace].