The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
A well concieved idea. A little short on setting details - I get the vague image of a world run by clones and computers, but it was pushed aside a little by dialogue. Would like to know more about the MCs' motivations and the setting that catalyzed them. Good story.
05/18/07
This is beautiful and so real. I love the title and the longing you portray in your characters. "Of such is the kingdom of heaven." I cannot imagine a world devoid of babies, since they're my entire universe. Great idea and well written.
05/18/07
I ached right along with her. You wrote a very convincing story about a world I hope we never know!
What a clever idea you had and presented well! I'd hate to be on a planet with no babies!
Were they going to earth? I want to think so. This is well-written.
05/20/07
Awesome! You drew me in with the title. Loved this piece. Very creative.
Very creative and well-written. Sweet story.
05/22/07
scary! I could see this happening. Good job on your sci fi!
I can hardly imagine a world without babies and toddlers! I think I would join them to the planet with babies, too!
10/18/07
Bonnie, your imagination is a wonderful blessing. This not only shows the dangers we as humans could face, but the blessings we have in our little ones. I think you should compile a book of your stories.