The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
This was very crisp writing with nouns and verbs that just come alive here. I loved what I took away as an alternative Sci Fi story on Saul/Paul.
05/21/07
Oh, very good! Wonderful writing, and I'd love to see this expanded.
05/23/07
Oooh! Loved this! Very creative, everything just sort of came alive and continued on, I was kind of disappointed that it ended so quickly, but the ending itself was excellent. Good job!
05/23/07
Agree with Jan, this is begging to be expanded. Great writing!
The ending was perfect for this well-told story.
05/23/07
Great detail in a short space - I would also love to see more of this! Excellent.