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Much to think about - a cautionary tale for all of us, I think. Kept me interested.
Oooh. Ouch. I was hoping they wouldn't get caught. I don't think that they should switch DNA to change being a mother, but I doubt they all want to just do exactly what their DNA thinks. This is haunting with a very real message. Good job. ^_^ My only note is in the second sentence, should that be "at the precise moment" or That instead of "a"?
Quite thought provoking and well written. The action kept me enthralled all the way through. Nice job.
The black market of the futrue...scary. I hope it never really happens. It kept my attention all the way through. Well done.
DNA swapping! What a clever, creative idea! You wrote the story very well. I didn't want them to get caught either, but then you couldn't have used your dramatic clinching sentence at the end