The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/07
Much to think about - a cautionary tale for all of us, I think. Kept me interested.
05/21/07
Oooh. Ouch. I was hoping they wouldn't get caught. I don't think that they should switch DNA to change being a mother, but I doubt they all want to just do exactly what their DNA thinks. This is haunting with a very real message. Good job. ^_^ My only note is in the second sentence, should that be "at the precise moment" or That instead of "a"?
05/22/07
Quite thought provoking and well written. The action kept me enthralled all the way through. Nice job.
The black market of the futrue...scary. I hope it never really happens. It kept my attention all the way through. Well done.
DNA swapping! What a clever, creative idea! You wrote the story very well. I didn't want them to get caught either, but then you couldn't have used your dramatic clinching sentence at the end