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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Write in the SCIENCE FICTION genre (05/10/07)

TITLE: Calvin and the Lady
By dub W
05/10/07


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Blazing lights burned through the night and screaming engines deafened earthly creatures for miles around. Calvin pulled his old Ford over to the rest stop and overlook to watch. It was his habit, every night, after his EMT shift, to gaze at the planes landing at LAX. There, he sipped on a cold beer and dreamed. He usually managed to park behind a row of scrub brush; that is unless young lovers had already claimed the space.

Calvin leaned back in his seat and turned up the radio. Someone banging on his window interrupted the lonesome twang of an electric guitar. Calvin jumped in his seat. “What the.” His sentence was cut short by a bright flashlight pointed at his nose.

“Git outta da car.” A voice, seemingly behind the light ordered.

Police harassment. “I ain’t done nuthin.”

“Git outta da car.” The voice repeated.

“All right, all right, keep yer shirt on, I’m comin’.” Calvin tossed the empty beer can into the backseat and opened his door. Two more bright headlights greeted him once he cleared his own door.

An arm reached out and pushed Calvin toward the lights. “Git in da back seat.”

“Hey, I gotta license and registration, I’m just watch’n planes.” Calvin walked to the back-side of the car and opened the door.

The arm pushed Calvin into the car and he fell face first, skinning his shins.

“Hey, take it easy,” he yelled as he fell into the car, except his fall continued and he tumbled for what seemed several minutes. When he looked up he was laying on his stomach in the aisle of divided rows of seats.

“Sir, sir, are you okay?” A kind sounding voice came from above Calvin. “Did you trip?”

“Un, I’m okay, where am I?” Calvin rolled over and sat up.

“Oh, you musta got a knock on the head, don’t you remember, this is Flight 601 to Los Angeles from Phoenix. Let me help you to your seat.”

The voice belonged to a young lady in a fight attendant uniform. Calvin accepted her help as she guided him into a passenger seat.

“Can I get you a soda?” Or Anything?”

“Got any beer?”

“Oh, you guys, you know we can’t serve alcohol on these short flights, but I would be happy to get you a juice or something.”

Calvin thought about. “Naw, I’ll be alright.” He leaned back in the seat. “Wow, this is nice.” I don’t know why or how, must be a dream.

The flight attendant walked down the aisle chatting with passengers. When she got to Calvin, she patted him on the shoulder. “Glad you’re okay, I was worried.”

“Thanks,” said Calvin. He wasn’t a bad looking man, sorta average. He had a low paying job, so he didn’t get out too much, and the all the guys at the rescue squad were married, so other than second shift dinner at a local franchise Calvin really had little social life.

“What do you do young man? Are you a stunt man or a circus performer?” An elderly lady tapped his arm.

“No, ma’am, just an EMT on a rescue squad.” Calvin noticed a curious smile on the older woman.

“Oh, that’s nice. My late husband had a scanner and listened to all those calls, it must be exciting.”

Calvin turned to the woman. “I suppose. Mostly, we treat and transport from car wrecks.”

“Oh, that’s important work.” Her eyes twinkled.

“Ma’am, are you going to L.A. to visit family?”

“No, I just came along to meet you.”

A chill went up Calvin’s spine. “You came on this flight to meet me?”

“Why yes, you delivered my child by the roadside, you held the hand of my husband when he left to meet the Lord. You pulled my son from a burning wreck, and you carried food and blankets to my family after the earthquake. You walked into a bank during a hold up to save an epileptic, you pulled my cat from my burning house.”

“Ma’am, I’m not sure I understand. Have we met?”

The woman turned and laughed.

Moments later the airplane landed at LAX and Calvin departed with the passengers. He gave a cabby his last fifty dollars to drive him up to the overlook. Sure enough, his car was still there. Calvin shook his head. “I suppose someday, I’ll understand.”


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Amy Michelle Wiley 05/17/07
Fun story! Too cool.
Verna Cole Mitchell 05/17/07
Very interesting story. I enjoyed it.
Lisa Holloway05/17/07
That would be so freaky! Good story.
Rita Garcia05/18/07
Oh, this is a fun read. My kind of Sci-fi. Great writing!
Edy T Johnson 05/18/07
"Sci-fi" is not my cup of tea, but "Twilight Zone" definitely is! Only a couple boo-boos (lying, not laying) that a teensy bit of editorial work will fix and you have a winner in my book.
Julie Arduini05/18/07
I can hear the Twilight Zone music as I finish reading this one. A true Sci Fi gem!
Myrna Noyes05/21/07
Very intruiging story! Like Calvin, I don't have a clue as to what actually happened to him, but I sure enjoyed reading about it! :D
Jan Ackerson 05/21/07
What fun! I like the echoes of Matthew 25 in the lady's longest speech. I felt breathless at the end, like poor Calvin.
Joanne Sher 05/21/07
Freaky - in a good way. Gave me goosebumps. Wonderful job of pulling the reader in.
Patty Wysong05/21/07
How fun! I love how you use dialect and dialog to help describe the person who is talking.
Philip Barnes05/23/07
Hummm! Great story. Very out of the box.
Betty Castleberry05/23/07
This is the kind of sci fi I can relate to. Very entertaining read, and a good messge, too.
Sara Harricharan 05/23/07
Hmmm, I like the twist here, when he falls into the back of the car and keeps falling. The real kicker was when he was talking to the lady and she was rattling off a whole list of his 'good deeds'. This read just like a dream too good to be true. Very much enjoyed by this reader. Thanks for sharing.
Verna Cole Mitchell 05/23/07
I've already commented, but now that I know whose it is, I just wanted to tell you that it's one of my favorites of yours!
LaNaye Perkins05/23/07
I really liked all the unexpected twists and turns in your story. It kept my attention from beginning to end!
Jacquelyn Horne05/23/07
Scary at first, but ending with a good pov.
Brenda Welc05/23/07
Got a little confused in the middle but that was probably just my blondness showing through. This was cool. I like how it all "came together" in the end. Let me know when the screen play for this is finished:)
Shari Armstrong 05/23/07
Intriguing.... was it a dream? was it real?
Shari Armstrong 05/23/07
Intriguing.... was it a dream? was it real?
Shari Armstrong 05/23/07
Intriguing.... was it a dream? was it real?
william price05/23/07
I knew I had been missing out on something this week. Well don, Dub. Impressive. God bless.
Angela M. Baker-Bridge05/23/07
Great message.
Kate Grey05/25/07
I really enjoyed this!