The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
Great title that roped me in. Your concept was fresh and very imaginative. This was my first Sci-fi that I've read and I am impressed! Great job!
Wow! What a fantastic imagination demonstrated and story wonderfully told!
Hehe, classic ending. I got a tad confused a couple of times, but otherwise great story!
05/17/07
Excellent story and very cleverly constructed!
05/17/07
What a great story--it captivated my attention and I loved the ending! Good job!
This one is great. I like how you showed how important it is to be out serving for Christ.
05/21/07
Ohh, this is good! I like the men in black twist here. It's very vivid with your descriptions and an entirely new look at what we believe and how. I love the ending best of all, especially when the bible just wouldn't get 'thrown out'. Great writing! ^_^
05/21/07
Powerful, biting indictment. Ouch.
05/21/07
Chilling commentary - and much to think about. Great writing.
05/23/07
Leaves the reader with much to think about! Great writing!
05/23/07
Well written overall, seemed to be a lot of speech tags.
Very visual. I could see the men in their shades.
Great message, too. Well done.
05/23/07
Clever play on words and Men in Black -enjoyed it. Loved the way the Bible kept coming back :)
Ha, ha! Loved this entry.

Al, this was one of the first stories I judged and it almost scared me. I didn't see how anyone could compete. Great work!