The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/07
Oh, how brave those nine were! What an experience for them all. I suppose although they knew it was quite an ordeal, they still saw that they were making history by being present in this school.

You portrayed the events effectively as a diary entry, and kept me gripped the whole way through. Well done!
05/14/07
Interesting & well done.
05/14/07
I like the format you chose to tell this story, it worked!
05/14/07
I liked the diary entries, they showed the flow of things and her feelings so well. Her vocabulary was great--you could see her struggle with proper English and her desire to learn. What bravery! Good job! :-)
05/15/07
I loved the format you used for this - you definitely got me into her head. Enjoyed this very much.