The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
AMEN. 'His-Story' is the only history that does not reside in a hazy or forgotten past. It is alive...
05/12/07
and AMEN! I love the structure of this.
05/14/07
This poem is beautiful. The second stanza gives me chills: "Jesus –
like molten gold
he was poured into the mold of a man,
to represent
humanity
with God as its center."

My mind wrapped itself around the thought of Jesus as precious pure gold, and where we should be with God as our center.

Some very good thoughts here. Amen.
05/14/07
Beautifully written and structured. Perhaps a bit "iffy" on topic, but definitely a keeper.