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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Write in the HISTORICAL genre (05/03/07)

TITLE: Free
By Sally Hanan
05/09/07


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Jesus –
he came to do what no one else could –
 he came to set us free.


Jesus –
like molten gold
 he was poured into the mold of a man,
  to represent
   humanity
    with God as its center.


Jesus –
his hands reached out
 to heal
  to stop
   to love.


Jesus –
his feet moved forward each day,
 to do
  his father’s
   will.


Jesus –
his mouth opened
 to speak
   to laugh
    to teach
     whatever the Father
      spoke.


Jesus –
he walked in his father
 and his father walked in him.


Jesus –
the wheel of the Son
 within the wheel of the Father
  within the power of the Holy Spirit.


Jesus --
the eyes of the Lord

all-seeing;

the voice of the Lord

proclaiming,

decreeing

breaking chains;

the body of the Lord dying,

saving

humanity

 and

  me.


Jesus –
he came to do what no one else could –
He came to set us

   free.



Inspiration from Ezekiel 1 and John 17


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Linda Germain 05/11/07
AMEN. 'His-Story' is the only history that does not reside in a hazy or forgotten past. It is alive...
Joanne Sher 05/12/07
and AMEN! I love the structure of this.
Sandra Petersen 05/14/07
This poem is beautiful. The second stanza gives me chills: "Jesus –
like molten gold
he was poured into the mold of a man,
to represent
humanity
with God as its center."

My mind wrapped itself around the thought of Jesus as precious pure gold, and where we should be with God as our center.

Some very good thoughts here. Amen.
Jan Ackerson 05/14/07
Beautifully written and structured. Perhaps a bit "iffy" on topic, but definitely a keeper.