The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
Excellent. A very real reminder of the persecution once, and still faced amongst the Chinese church.
05/10/07
Oh, this was very good! The title fit it so well. What's sad, is that this sort of thing is still going on, and not only in China. Keep up the great work!
05/14/07
Perfect title, and wonderful detail. This was agonizing. (in a good way hehe)
05/14/07
Very moving, and the two passages at the end are incredible! To have your MC be able to use the words of one book to point to the true Word--exquisite.
Very moving, Terry. High quality writing. Educational, inspiring and moving. Great job.
05/15/07
Excellent story! I loved how she was able to remember verses from Scripture to use in her tough situation.
05/16/07
All truth is God's truth — even if someone else stakes a claim on it. Love your last line, and the drama leading up to it was well done.
05/16/07
Very dramatic. I enjoyed this and it makes me realize how stupid I can be to complain and stumble here.
05/16/07
Great writing here. I too liked the fact of pulling scripture from within herself when she needed it. Isn't this what the Holy Spirit wants us to do. Excellent story.
Good story.