The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
Okay, this is a wonderful narrative posed in a delightful time period. However, each piece of dialogue gets its own paragraph, just makes reading easier. Watch transitions too, hard to follow a story that jumps. Otherwise, I enjoyed the read.
05/14/07
I love all things sea ... and lighthouses.

You did a great job of atmosphere, dialogue and character. I really enjoyed everything about this piece!

Loved it!
05/16/07
Grandad just needed a good reason to leave his isolated splendor — and he got it. Good for him. I liked this.
05/17/07
This is such a delicious read. I love the atmosphere, the characters, the drama and the miracle.
05/17/07
I enjoyed this on so many levels...Great Writing!